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                My experience with project two could have been better. I had a little more trouble with time management for this project and got a few of the due dates mixed up but I was able to focus more on finding sources that are peer reviewed and it was helpful that I was able to use the Florida State library to help with my resources. The writing was difficult this time around due to incorporating the sources and creating an argument.

                I enjoyed project two because it was easy to use the outline for the project and that helped with writing things such as the claims and finding statements that would benefit my argument. I was a little confused at certain points of what to write about and coming up with enough information to support my argument without being bias. As well as the word count. I enjoyed all the feedback that I was able to get from my drafts. Reading all the different papers that was chosen for my paper was nice because of the views that they had were useful for creating the paper that I wanted to write. I am trying to be upgrade my writing skills when it comes to informative writing. This is because I am not very good at these types of papers because it is hard to keep the bias out of the paper. I also still need to work on my proofreading.

 

                Writing a first draft is always the most difficult part when writing a paper due to the different factors that are involved. I had the most trouble making it to the word count as well as incorporating all ten of my sources using evidence that supports my claim. Following the outlines were easy to find what I was supposed to write about and how. One of my favorite parts of the paper was finishing the revised annotated bibliography because it was so long and tiring but worth the information I found.

 

              I enjoyed my classmates’ feedback for the project because they were able to spot mistakes that I had missed as well as provide great feedback. Reading the other papers on every body’s website was also interesting because I was able to see everyone’s essays and think about what I can add to mine. Having more access to resources available to me was a great help. Project two was a little bit of trouble  for me and I am glad that I was able to write able to write a paper using new resources.

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